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本書為高中生備戰(zhàn)高考英語書面表達用書。含有以下六大精彩欄目：

命題探究：探究高考英語書面表達試題考綱要求及命題特點，揭秘滿分要素和寫作攻略；

滿分速遞：選2017考場滿分作文，并對其亮點句型和高級詞匯進行特別標(biāo)注，點擊揭秘滿分元素；

五年真題：選Zui近5年高考滿分作文，精準(zhǔn)把脈高考動態(tài)；

點石成金：名師支招增加得分亮點，通過改變句式、詞匯等，巧妙提升得分檔次；

模板：給出常用寫作模板，通過套用模板，將寫作題變?yōu)樘羁疹}，考生輕松取得寫作高分，由怕寫作文到會寫高分作文；

熱點預(yù)測：預(yù)測2018熱點寫作話題，精選必背范本，有備無患高效備考。

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分類精編2017高考英語書面表達試題，立體解讀命題主旨，詳解滿分要素及寫作思路；

點擊考場滿分元素，升級得分亮點；

給出四大題型和常考體裁模板，以不變應(yīng)萬變！

高能預(yù)測2018考場作文，高效備考來年高考；

從怕寫作文到會寫考場高分作文，這一本就夠了！

在線預(yù)覽

Ⅰ提綱作文

[2017 全國Ⅰ卷]

(適用地區(qū)：河南、河北、山西、江西、湖北、湖南、廣東、安徽、福建、山東等)

[試題展示]

假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計劃。內(nèi)容包括：

(1)時間和地點；(2)內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；(3)課前準(zhǔn)備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Leslie,

Yours,

Li Hua

[真題評析]

今年全國Ⅰ卷的書面表達仍是英語書信(郵件)。試題以考生熟悉的話題切入，讓考生有話可說，寫作內(nèi)容又涉及唐詩和唐朝歷史，這體現(xiàn)了語言作為文化交流工具的雙向性，英語不僅可以介紹西方文化，也是把中國文化介紹給世界的媒介。試題較自然地融入了我國傳統(tǒng)文化內(nèi)容，運用中國元素講好中國故事。根據(jù)表達的需要，作文應(yīng)以一般將來時為主，可穿插使用其他時態(tài)。

[參考范文]

Dear Leslie,

I’m glad to see you have made great progress in learning Chinese these days. I’m writing to tell you something about the plan for your next Chinese class.

As the weather is getting hotter and hotter, it is a good idea to study indoors. I’m planning to have your next Chinese class from 8:00 am to 11:00 am on Saturday through QQ video at home. Please get ready for it. We are going to learn some Chinese poems that were written in the Tang Dynasty. Therefore, please spend some time taking a brief look at the history of the Tang Dynasty, which will help you make good preparations for your class.

Yours,

Li Hua

滿分作文1

Dear Leslie,

I’m Li Hua. I am delighted to know you are interested in Chinese poems. Now I’m writing to inform you of the plan for the next class.①

Actually many people are very fond of reciting Chinese poems.② I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.③ We are to meet on Sunday morning at the People’s Park, which is an ideal place to study.④ Our class will last from 8:00 am to 10:00 am, then we can go to the bookstore together. Furthermore, I suggest you borrow a history book and learn the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance, which can help you better understand the poems to be learned.⑤

Should you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to let me know.⑥ Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

滿分點擊

① that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，高級詞匯be delighted和made great progress的使用，使文章開篇增色不少；

② 使用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句、what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句以及過去分詞短語作狀語，屬于高級復(fù)合句，顯示了作者扎實的英語功底；

③ in order to、acquire、advise等高級詞匯的使用，使本句成為文章的亮點；

④ 結(jié)尾處使用高級詞匯benefit from，使文章上了一個臺階。

重要詞匯與短語

1. be fond of 喜歡；喜愛

例Jeff is fond of Chinese classical literature. 杰夫很喜歡中國古典文學(xué)。

2. in advance 提前；預(yù)先

例They will pay a hundred dollars in advance. 他們將預(yù)付100美元。

點石成金

原作

Dear Leslie,

I’m Li Hua. I am glad to see you find pleasure in learning Chinese poems. I’m writing to tell you something about your next Chinese class.

We are going to learn some Chinese Tang Dynasty poems. And we will have class in our school library from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm on Friday. Poems written in the Tang Dynasty have been translated into other languages and they are popular both at home and abroad. I’m sure you will like them very much. In order to help you understand them better, you’d better learn the history of the Tang Dynasty before the class.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

范例

Dear Leslie,

I’m Li Hua. I am so delighted to see you are interested in learning Chinese poems. I’m writing to tell you the schedule of your next Chinese class.

We are going to learn some Chinese poems written in the Tang Dynasty in our school library from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm on Friday. To be frank, poems written in the Tang Dynasty are popular both at home and abroad, many of which have been translated into other languages. I’m sure you will find them well worth reading. In order to help you have a better understanding of them, you’d better learn the history of the Tang dynasty ahead of time.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

點評

原作要點比較齊全，基本完成了寫作任務(wù)。但短文中使用的簡單句較多，行文不夠連貫，表達略為生硬，并且缺乏高級詞匯和亮點句式。這些導(dǎo)致其得分檔次只能定在第四檔，即得分18 分左右。

范例對原作的用詞和句式進行了修改，詞匯使用和句式變換方面較為出色，將得分檔次提升到了第五檔，得分22 分左右。

1. 用高級詞匯對原句進行升級，如:be delighted to do sth.，schedule，have a better understanding of，ahead of time 等，使表達更地道；

2.升級了原作中的簡單句子，如...well worth reading代替原句中的like them very much，用many of which have been...對原句進行整合等，不僅語言更，而且提高了寫作的難度，尤其把them改為which，使原句變成了非限制性定語從句，大大提升了文章的得分檔次；

3. 使用from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm on Friday時間狀語，過去分詞written作后置定語，使文章的語言表達更、更豐富，為整篇文章增加了亮點。